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Nicely written, Mr. Collide. We need not endure a punch-in-the-gut of any kind nor absurd fantasy, nor sickening sweet language that nobody real actually uses. The tasteful demur about the passionate details is appropriate and makes the reader run his own mind to fill in what the parties in the story are experiencing. Conjugal affection is not a spectator sport, and most of us

have experience to draw from while imagining our own paragraphs to add. I feel sorry for anyone who has not dared to enter the passion pit to explore climbing to never-before-known heights of ecstasy and passion for himself.

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