I really like the way it ended. You left room for a continuance if you want to, & avoided a cliched resolution -- either good or bad. (In fact, you avoided cliche throughout -- good job!)
You have talent, certainly. I look forward to seeing what else you come up with.
I really like the way it ended. You left room for a continuance if you want to, & avoided a cliched resolution -- either good or bad. (In fact, you avoided cliche throughout -- good job!)
You have talent, certainly. I look forward to seeing what else you come up with.
Thanks, Tom! I didn’t know how to end it, so went with how high school (and I think life) ends…by trailing off to the next adventure. As for cliches, I’m sure there are quite a few. I’m a sentimental sap, so not afraid of a little cliche. Appreciate your words of encouragement. Cheers!
I really like the way it ended. You left room for a continuance if you want to, & avoided a cliched resolution -- either good or bad. (In fact, you avoided cliche throughout -- good job!)
You have talent, certainly. I look forward to seeing what else you come up with.
Thanks, Tom! I didn’t know how to end it, so went with how high school (and I think life) ends…by trailing off to the next adventure. As for cliches, I’m sure there are quite a few. I’m a sentimental sap, so not afraid of a little cliche. Appreciate your words of encouragement. Cheers!